The first time the doctor paid attention to me that afternoon was when he saw me surprised by the sharp crackle like a scattered rain shower on the tin roof.

• 那天下午，医生第一次注意到我，是因为发现我很震惊的听到，铁皮屋顶上传来的一阵刺耳的噼啪声，就像东一块西一块的下着雷雨一样。